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Gaidenlight Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Nice layouts on this and your characters man. you did really well on seperating the planes and getting that moody vibe even through grey scale. as a landscape on its own it doesn't pretty well, I like the Runes etched on the standing stones. I think I might of placed a few things differently just to push the viewers eyes to them stones tho. the eyes tend to follow contour line, if you break your forms down to there basic shapes most of your lines are traveling up and away from the stones. I think I might of brought a branch off the tree on right in foreground dipping back in towards center just to make sure those eyes come back to the image.....kinda like a circle compositon.  Great job man. I can see a bit more thought and design work in your more recent stuff :-)
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ranits123 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Thanks for the amazing comment, firsthand. There are still a few elements that I will add
to this landscape painting, which are the two characters on the sheets I've shown. I hope
then the composition makes more sense. However I fully understand what you are pointing
at so, I'll definitely take that into account.

Again, thanks.
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Gaidenlight Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2016  Student Digital Artist
I guess I jumped the gun again ;-) I kinda figured it wasnt completely done yet, there was that slightly obvious gap between the rocks that felt empty for a reason haha. Im sure your instructor or classmates give ya decent feedback was mainly just stating a few things in-case something got missed. Have fun finishing it man, look forward o seeing its completion!
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